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He had everything he ever wanted.He had the name and the fame. He never got out of words, ever, but when it came to writing a letter to his Darla... Blank, because she was not with him anymore. He was going to congratulate her on her 4th wedding anniversary. She had left him when he had nothing yet he wasn’t married…
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15 comments:
ouch,...that is sad...do i c a weeping heart???
Raji,
You are giving an open ended plot for your readers to elaborate and imagine ? :-)
Or I'm missing something ? It's been a long day !
@ Sid: a definite weeping heart.. if that what you want.
@ Madhu : its for you to decide.. pal..
Hi! That's sad. What a waste! Four years for someone who doesn't care! Sad indeed. Good luck!
Nice story Raji! I also think it's a weeping heart! Not married yet...suggest that only I think... Is it a 55 fiction?
It's is sad when you have everything that you want but not what you need. Btw those aren't my words, heard it in a song :)
Ah, such a sad love story! And all in 55 words?! Nicely done.
It hurts when someone you want leaves you for something that you can always get, later. I mean the fame, money and other materialistic stuffs.
Nice 55 fiction. :)
Bechara or Moron?
plenty of fish in the sea!
I din get the "She left him when he had nothin" part. M I too dumb to comment?
Nice, and well done!
Good luck for BATON6 :)
dropped here for the first time...
touching..55 fiction...lovely...
Geeta
beautiful 55 er..made me sad though..
Even I wrote a open ended post and people roasted me for that! But I loveed ur 55F so much!!
*hugs*
aww! :(
you don't need no one... to see your day thru'
Its nice to read 55ier for this pic...apt one
Good attempt :)
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