Priceless - 55 fiction

She was at the peak of ecstasy. She couldn't believe that doing it would give her so much of pleasure. Finally she was done completely with it.




"Dad, Can I have one more Ice Cream, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee".
The look on the face of his five year old daughter enjoying her ice cream. Priceless.

 I miss Ice Cream and Chocolates. I miss my dad too.

Look whose talking… 55 fiction

I thought of this one when I was playing with my neighbour’s kid who was so damn interested in what I was doing on this weird thing on my table. He kept pushing the keys on my laptop trying to figure out something. This is just my imagination on that.

He was sitting on the lap and glazing at this weird thing in front of him.

" What does papa do with this thing, even ignoring me? “ he thought

“I should do something to it so that papa will pay more attention to me"

He touched it and sees himself on the screen with a smile.

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55 fiction

My first 55 fiction. Inspired by many bloggers. I hope you can understand it.

Dying proposition

"You are not dying", said the young doctor, but I knew that something was wrong.
All I wanted to do now was lie on bed along with my grand son and tell him my love story,
The one which paved way for his life too!!"