Sunday, September 20, 2009

55 fiction

My first 55 fiction. Inspired by many bloggers. I hope you can understand it.

Dying proposition



"You are not dying", said the young doctor, but I knew that something was wrong.
All I wanted to do now was lie on bed along with my grand son and tell him my love story,
The one which paved way for his life too!!"

7 comments:

soin said...

most wise old people know when they see death in its face..

Kaka said...

hmm.....nice write ...:)...keep writing more....but dont write more than one atleast in 2 days cause those who have blogrolled u wouldnt notice the other post unless they see the blog as a whole....:)...anyways doesnt matter to me ...:)

Shankar said...

hmmm... a very nice 55....

HaRy!! said...

nice one...have heard from my folks that someof the oldies as soin says...they can forsee the future!..gud1..cya around

HaRy

Rajalakshmi Umapathy said...

@ Soin & Hary- May be he does
@Kaka- Sure will write only one.
@Shankar- Thanks pa

Bala said...

Short 'n' sweet post!!!

Shas said...

Nice one.

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